Thursday, 18 March 2021

How to make flower with play dough by Paula

I have made a green flower in the grass. It is a large green flower. It is planted in the spiky grass. You also can see roots under the grass.The colour of the flower is green because it is made out of play dough. 

Monday, 15 February 2021

Persuasive Text


Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is not good for us. Do you know it is full of sugar? It will rot our teeth. It will make us fat. And we will not be able to run or play rugby. It is ok to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.                                                                

                                                                                  By Paula

Tuesday, 28 April 2020

My Favourite Ice-Cream

My favourite ice-cream is chocolate. 

Wednesday, 15 April 2020

Describe a Picture

Learning goal:  I am learning to write a descriptive text. 
Success criteria:  I can do this this when 

  • I add powerful verbs
  • I add describing words
The waves crashed into the boat. The people were frightened. They thought they were going to drown.
                                                   by Paula